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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-02-20 10:53 PM



Pain has been sent to mingle
within the content
bystander with ashen complexion
stands out evermore

Clarity weeps
as all that was clear
must now take on new identity
if pain must make its presence known

Greetings lay unmoved
are never eased gently into position
yet slip slide in gaps
to challenge and move life.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-20 11:08 PM


I really liked this one. great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-20 11:25 PM




(big huggssssssss) You describe this vagueness so well, sweet friend, it seems clarity takes on a whole new identity in that case and seems to lie and betray its believers, it is such a difficult thing to deal with! (sad sigh) This is very well said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-02-20 11:38 PM



passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-21 03:31 AM


awesome!
Cerenity
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5 posted 2003-02-22 11:04 PM


Hi gemjop,

(Clarity weeps
as all that was clear
must now take on new identity
if pain must make its presence known)

Wonderful description of mingling of these feelings.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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