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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-02-20 07:55 PM



What can you do with IT?

pick it
stick it
dip it
love it
Push it
pull it
beat it
kick it
yank it
slap it
hold it
know it
sold it
bought it
taught it
show it
blow it
freeze it
heat it
kneed it
please it
breath it
squeeze it
read it
kiss it
bite it
try it
sip it
fly it
tie it
throw it
own it
watch it
spot it
write it
quit it
rip it
tip it
teeze it
weed it
smoke it
tote it
walk it
catch it
do it
done it
did it
return it
vote it

You never know how many things you are able to do with IT.
Thomas
AKA
Rogue--- ITs in the name

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-20 11:06 PM


LOL This one should be put in the book for a laugh.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-20 11:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Thomas, I just love this creative cadence you used here, sweet friend, I toon found it curious why you titled it "Return It" as though that is the key thing to do with "it", this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-02-21 03:30 AM


creative indeed, fun write
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2003-02-21 02:33 PM




I remember the first time this was posted... and I smiled then... and am still smiling now...

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5 posted 2003-02-25 06:59 PM


Love it!  Now you have me going with a word.
WhiteRose
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6 posted 2003-03-20 08:57 PM


Very rogueish

But seriously, it's just darling. Gets my vote.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-20 10:34 PM


...I did it!

Peace & Light,
EA

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-03-20 10:53 PM


Cool, fun write...much enjoyed!
garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-03-21 03:25 AM


What can we do with IT?  Vote for IT!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-03-21 05:29 AM


Hahahaha awesome - made me smile this morning - a keeper  xxoo
WhiteRose
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11 posted 2003-04-08 08:27 PM



dreambuilder
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12 posted 2003-04-09 07:18 PM


I Loved the visuals
while reading this - lol

fresh & creative

Aimster
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13 posted 2003-04-10 12:00 PM


really creative fun poem! i am voting
for this...book needs light pieces too!
you made me smile. thank you. take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Thomas119gold
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14 posted 2003-04-10 10:47 PM


Just wrote it
for the fun of it
LOL
Thank you all of you for reading it
Thomas

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