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vandana
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0 posted 2003-02-20 05:19 PM



Then was a song
There were words to say
Then was you
You
Who knew everything
Everything that would
Filled my heart
With love
Never thought of a song
That would bring tears
Into my eyes
Then was you
Who washed my tears away
Then was a river
A river so deep
Couldn't wait for a minute
To see love that would make
my dreams come true
Then was was you
Yes lyning here
Nothing was founded
Untill there was you
You would make
My dreams come true
Then was you
Who gave me everything
That would make my heart sing
away
Then was you

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-02-20 05:39 PM


Enjoyed vandana...James
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2 posted 2003-02-20 06:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish for this love to always warble in your heart and may you always sing with happiness! (kiss on cheek) Keep singing that song of joy, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-02-20 07:59 PM


Vandana, as always, your poems are from the heart.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-21 03:48 AM


beautiful
Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-03-31 10:11 PM


Nice feeling....good write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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