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suthern
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0 posted 2003-02-20 04:30 PM


When buying things upon the net
You aren’t quite sure just what you’ll get
Quality’s out there to be found
But shysters and their frauds abound.

The same is true with folks you meet
On cyberhighways or your own street
Some are friends you’ll always treasure
Others are evil beyond measure.

As I have surfed these past few years
I’ve known a few that caused me tears
But outnumbering them by far
Are ones that greatly surpass par.

You cannot know how much it means
To have a friend like jellybeans
Trials and troubles cause her strife
But she brings colors to my life.

Sometimes it’s easier to dwell
And wallow in our private hell
But she’s there throwing a rope
With hugs and love she holds out hope.

Kethry once tried to give advice
Only to learn I’m far from nice
And stubborn as the day is long...
How first impressions can be wrong!

Her kindness just amazes me
And I’ve watched her poetry
Reach levels I cannot attend -
I am so proud to call her friend.

Though far across the ocean wide
Somehow Marsha is by my side
Encouraging with her belief
And incapable of deceit.

She writes her words in brightest pink
But somehow, I do not think
A steadier friend could ever be
I do adore her - utterly.

And once I thought I’d disappear
Only to find Marge standing near
Across the miles, she took my hand,
Held on till I found firmer sand.

She has a gift I can’t explain
When my heart cried, she heard its pain.
And I’m so glad she can’t refuse
Even one of her crew of muse.

Sweet Pepper says she’s not a poet
But she’s all heart and we all know it
I miss her words each time I post
But it’s her health I miss the most.

There’s so much fight in her small frame
But she’s a charmer, just the same...
Eyes that sparkle in a smiling face
I cherish her unequaled grace.

Though not around much anymore
There’s Long John Ag and his sweet Lor
They’ve found their happily ever after
And filled their days with love and laughter.

I miss the humor of ole peg leg
If it would help, be sure I’d beg
For him to join us with his mirth -
Of sailor slurs, there’s been a dearth!

But his good ole pal Balladeer
Still blesses us with being here
I love him though he’s known to nag
And malign sweet saintly Toerag!

He has a basket of golf balls
But their number quickly palls
When compared to his gifts of pen -
He’s one of the finest that’s ever been.

Around Seymour, I know that you’ll find
That age is just a state of mind
I could sit and listen to him all night
For he is simply a delight.

How treasured are his gifts of word
From the infinite to the absurd
His topics share his wisdom well -
His life he shares with Isabel.

And yes, I saved the best for last -
My every dream for five years past
Has been that he find happiness
In this whole world, Toe is the best.

I’ve never known a finer man
I’ve watched a lot - don’t think I can
Think of things to change if given the chance -
(But that he’d think of me with romance!)

His goodness goes to his very core
Whatever I say, there are many more
Attributes to admire; he's almost perfect -
Day in and day out, he’s a friend to respect.

There are many others that I could mention
If I dared ask for more of your attention
But these are the ones I thank God for each night
They nurture, they inspire... they delight.

They brighten each and every day
These friends I’ve met along the way.

[This message has been edited by suthern (02-20-2003 04:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-20 04:36 PM


and these words my friend? are why you have so many dear friends, they only echo your beauty....love you lady
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2 posted 2003-02-20 04:43 PM


(chuckling) very nicely done Suthern...and all you mention are indeed special people..and as blessed to call you friend as you are them..


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3 posted 2003-02-20 04:48 PM


jellybeans: I have to find people with a high tolerance for blondes... and I just lucked out to find the very cream of the crop. *S* Thank you... love you too! *S*

Cpat: ROFL... You might well be on that list yourself, sir... if I didn't pronounce your name somewhat like a cat's hiss! LOL That's tough to rhyme! *G* Thank you! *S*

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4 posted 2003-02-20 04:51 PM


I am sure that those friends that you have named in this loving poem, will be honored to see their names among these finest! Yes, Passions truly is a family and you are one of the most beloved of us all! Your warmth, your wit, your charm, your talent and your beautiful soul add to all of our lives. You, Dear One, are indeed yourself very special!

Extra warm hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-02-20 04:57 PM


EA: Careful there... or you're gonna get me so sentimental I'll be swimming through the tears. *S* Thank you, kind lady... so very, very much! *S*

I knew some of these wonderful people before we found Passions... but old and new friends have blended seamlessly in my heart. *S* But there's still more room... if you'll fold your wings jes a tad? LOL

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6 posted 2003-02-20 05:51 PM


suthern
This could not be better, enjoyed very much.

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(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a very special friend to every one of us and we all love you so much, your gorgeous compassionate words of friendship always bring tears to my eyes as they do here! (kiss on cheek) I will always be your friend just as you are a friend in my heart, yay, you truly are an angel of words, I send many angel hugs and bluebird of happiness smiles your way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-20 06:05 PM


Suthern...you have shown through friendship's love, your own sweet heart, so here's a hug!     The intent of this poem is wonderful!
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9 posted 2003-02-20 07:46 PM


Very nice   You've shown me just how much of a family these people are and how much they all love eachother.  This is much more than I expected when I joined.  Even though I'm still very new, I've seen much evidence of how true this all is.  Enjoyed very much,

Shlee

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10 posted 2003-02-21 03:54 AM


awesome write lady!
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11 posted 2003-02-21 04:27 AM


Well you poured your soul into gifting your friends with gratitude and love and you know what they about that don't you?  You will receive it double fold.  A very nice tribute to them.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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12 posted 2003-02-21 04:34 AM


What a privilege and honour knowing you, when we are speaking of cream of the crop, remember YOU are the cat's miaow.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2003-02-21 05:28 AM


And you, my dear lady, have been a friend to many in return. You have brightened many a day with your southern smile. Passion friends are the best! Loved this poem.
Love to you and sweet Pepper
Liz

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14 posted 2003-02-21 08:42 AM


This was fine write from a fine gal...you really need to post so much more than you do.....(The only way anyone could guess that you're blonde though is by the stanza about Toerag).....LOL....very nice thoughts sweets
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15 posted 2003-02-21 08:53 AM


Yes Suthern Lady, this shows what a very special Suthern Lady you really are.
I haven't been here very long, but you, as well as so many others, have already proven to be my friends.....and proven it very well, I might say. this home of Ron's called Passions truly does have a Family Of Friends, and I am so glad to be a part of this big family.

Thank you sweet Suthern for this....
You are very special   

Heart Hugs from
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-02-21 09:21 AM


Seymour: The dear folks I wrote about couldn't be better... that's for sure! *S* Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked! *S*

M'Toe: What an incredibly kind reply... I thank you very much! *S*

Martie: Hugs are always appreciated. *S* Thank you! *S*

Shlee: I'm so glad you enjoyed... and welcome to Passions! *S* You won't find a more wonderful group of people. *S*

PS: Thank you so much, awesome lady. *S*

Mysteria: I could never repay what they give me every day. *S* Thank you so very much! *S*

Kethry: The honor is mine, dear friend... and I'll try not to curdle the cream. *G* Thank you very much! *S*

Elizabeth: Thank you so very much, kind lady. *S* I talked with our spicy friend last night... how does she go through so much and leave me smiling? *S*

Toerag: But this one's LONG.... doesn't that count for at least several posts? LOL And my blonde may just be rubbing off on you, sweet one... cause my praise of you couldn't be more deserved... all THREE verses! LOL Thank you so much, best friend of my life. *S*

garysgirl: Talk about special... you are certainly that. *S* I'm so glad you joined our group of friends... HUGS!!! Thank you!

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17 posted 2003-02-21 12:11 PM


I almost missed this poem -- almost passed it by! That would have been a loss.....

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18 posted 2003-02-21 12:36 PM


I am folding my wings "jes a tad" as I am making this reply!--but if I folded them too much, I may be banned from the heavenly fold! lol


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19 posted 2003-02-23 12:16 PM


Suthern beloved one, because I love you I came here to find your poem, and because I love you utterly I read it, and you know that smile that is so elusive at times well you planted one right here within my soul. Thank you beloved one for loving me, and holding my hand when the darkness speaks my name.

This is simply perfect as you are, no one could ask for a better soul to rest at ease with. There was a time, and although it seems a lifetime ago, we didn’t know each other very well, I thank the Lord that HE sent you here to me. Your touch is the kiss of the morning dew, it refreshes a soul even as it reaffirms that life continues to flow no matter what. Thank you darling heart for all you are. Oh and yes I love this utterly utterly utterly



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

[This message has been edited by Marsha (02-23-2003 12:19 PM).]

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20 posted 2003-02-24 04:54 PM


Ratleader: The loss would have been mine... your response warmed this heart. *S* Thank you! *S*

EA: For folded wings... *G*
A northern light that gently glows
As bits of angel dust she shows
She's loaned to us from up above,
Greets one and all with words of love

But being of an earthly birth
A bit risque' can be her mirth
Our Earth Angel may not take flight
But she fills us with delight.

Marsha: To give you a smile, even for a moment... is worth all the typing and then some! *G* Thank you for your words... thank you even more for your friendship. *S*


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21 posted 2003-02-25 09:42 AM


Suthern, your kind and gracious poetic reply to my reply has near moved me to tears! That was so incredibly sweet of you--and it is even more special to me because it was written by YOU! Your poetry has always delighted me, but I have to say, this one has delighted me even more!

~ May your life flow gently with the tides of life...

Big loving HUGS and huge happy smiles,
Your friend,
Linda

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22 posted 2003-02-25 09:45 AM


Awww... you sweetie. *G* But now dry up those tears... can't have soggy feathers in friendship's nest. *G*

Thank you, ma'am. *S*

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23 posted 2003-02-25 01:03 PM


....there now! My angel breath has dried up my tear-soaked feathers! Now we will have a dry friendship nest! tehe

~ Have a wonderful day!
Linda

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