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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-02-20 04:00 PM



She moves me by the words that she writes
her thoughts on paper take flight
I am inspired by each line I read over and over
and drink in the syllables like wine

The taste of her talent dances in my mind
a soul of poetry truly defined
she is a nymph of literature that speaks to me
her words mold my emotions into a chained slave
waiting to read her next page


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-20 04:08 PM


This is an awesome write. So it gets my vote.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-20 06:54 PM




(smiles) Oh Thomas, I'm sure with all my heart this special somebody will always be touched by these loving words and cherish them with dear heart! (big hugggsssssss) This has my vote, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-02-20 07:04 PM


Why thank you! tehe

Seriously speaking, whoever is the inspiration for this poem, must be a fine writer--as is the writer of this poem!

Warm hugs,
EA

Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2003-02-20 07:39 PM


Thank you
This is my favorite for a friend who is a great poet

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5 posted 2003-02-21 03:58 AM


yes!
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6 posted 2003-02-21 05:34 AM


Thomas,
i'm sure your friend must feel honoured and flattered...this also somehow reminds me of Mrs Rowling (if i remember correctly), author of the Harry Potter series...i can't wait for volume 5 to come out!

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7 posted 2003-02-21 11:30 AM


wink...i love it...helen  *click*
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8 posted 2003-02-21 11:32 AM


Thomas,
Well done, enjoyed.

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9 posted 2003-02-21 11:34 AM



Yes, quite enjoyable!

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10 posted 2003-02-21 12:00 PM


This is excellent...

regards,
sudhir

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11 posted 2003-02-25 06:54 PM


Well hope you send it to her, what a fantastic poem for a poet!

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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12 posted 2003-02-25 07:46 PM


Very nice.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Connel
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13 posted 2003-02-25 07:46 PM


Very nice.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

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14 posted 2003-02-25 09:13 PM


Hello Thomas

You have paid your friend the ultimate compliment through your words.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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15 posted 2003-02-26 09:38 AM


Very much enjoyed...gets my vote!
~hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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16 posted 2003-02-26 01:07 PM


awesome write!
Thomas119gold
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17 posted 2003-02-26 04:40 PM


A special lady deserves attention
and she is an extraordinary woman and poet

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18 posted 2003-02-26 09:11 PM


A yes vote to this, for it is the ultimate honor for a poet, to have another poet write something such as this. Thanks for sharing this beauty!
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19 posted 2003-02-26 09:18 PM


I love it when my Love writes poetry to me. It makes it even more beautiful, knowing he wrote it with me in mind. He loves my poems I write for him, too....

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-26-2003 09:18 PM).]

Learninginlife
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20 posted 2003-03-17 03:49 PM


You have such a way of expressing your feelings for this woman
She is a lucky woman with out a doubt

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