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GavinKidd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 44
NH

0 posted 2003-02-20 01:14 PM

Trumpets sound the hunt’s begun!
I’ll follow you down through the daily sun.
You slide on ice
          and skip on water.
I’ll find you yet,
          you abominable
               monster!
I’ll destroy you
          and mount
               you above my bed!
You will not hurt me,
          ever again.

© Copyright 2003 G. David Shennett - All Rights Reserved

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-02-20 01:20 PM

LOL..Cute write....much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-20 01:21 PM

I thought this was a cute poem. I really enjoyed it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-02-20 09:14 PM

gavin...yep fight em, or the monsters carry on mocking and menacing don't they?
very much enjoyed....
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-21 03:43 AM

yes, very cute

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