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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-20 10:56 AM



a mazed
drenched in sweat
forming trenches to win
the war against nature's fallout
melting

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-20 11:07 AM


I really like this. Very heartfelt

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-20 12:36 PM


keep on going!
Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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3 posted 2003-02-20 02:48 PM



Nice, Maureen!
Keep it up!

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