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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-02-20 08:57 AM

Hope snags itself
against a trinity
of failures

Unraveled slowly
across a plain
of years

Threadbare it
dangles in the wind
difficult to grasp

Impossible to spool

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-20 09:03 AM

Now why am I not finding your name anywhere in Reflections? Hmmm? Whassup with that, anyway?

Get your behind in there, Raph....

Please?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-02-20 09:43 AM

very cool my dear...I like this

and yeah, You need to put one of your excellent poems in for the book!!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-02-20 10:34 AM

Thanks both of you but i wouldn't know what to choose

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-20 12:45 PM

great imagery!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-02-20 12:47 PM

Ohhh I have said it before, you are masterful with words......

Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-02-20 08:26 PM

Thank you Dixie you're always so sweet

Lauren I really appreciate the support

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-02-20 10:11 PM

I say choose them all,and n easy vote you will get.
Jason

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-02-20 10:21 PM

Unraveled slowly
across a plain
of years

AAAAArgh! the pain. you do this so well.
said in so few lines. origional as ever Raphael.

you inspire.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-02-20 10:30 PM

I was wondering the same about the book....HuH..where is it????
Go find one..or write one..but go..

Hugs,
Ethel

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-02-20 10:40 PM

Thanks jason appreciate that

Thanks gemma you're really on a roll I love what you've been up to lately

Ethel thanks I'll try to find something hugs back

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-02-21 12:22 PM

Good things come in small packages; so does truth.

Well done -- keep that microscope fixed hard on the little true things you show so well.

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______________Ratleader______________

Fatman
New Member

since 2003-02-21

Posts 8

12 posted 2003-02-21 02:34 AM

very nice work.

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