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Fauxreal
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0 posted 2003-02-20 08:36 AM



He says he loves you
But he strikes you
Curses at and fights you
Lies and cheats and steals
What is worse-
There's no remorse
He feels.
While these crimes
Are stackin up
He keeps right on
Actin up.
Thinkin that you'll
Never tire
Not caring if your
Patience will ever expire.
Or how many times
Your heart will break
When he's two or three days late...
For dinner.
What can she do that
I can't?
What does she have that
I don't ?
How can she love you
Like I do ?
Where will she go
That I won't?
He says
All you do is rant
And rave
About all of the things
You crave
Like that he flies
Into a rage...
And blacks your eye-
Somehow you feel that
He likes to see you cry.
Then he gets down on his knees
And starts beggin
Baby please
I love you
There's no one else for me...
But to hear her tell it -
It's a different story.
Don't go cryin
To your girlfriends
They're not gonna help-
This is somethin you gotta
Do all by yourself.
Make your mind up
Don't take it no more
Pack all your stuff
And just walk out that door.

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-02-20 10:01 AM


If you need help packing, I'd help....Heart hugsssss.......find that peace you are searching for.....and keep telling yourself you are worthy of so much more then "he" offers....


Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-20 12:44 PM


I did it too
Fauxreal
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since 2003-02-16
Posts 38

3 posted 2003-02-20 01:08 PM


oh no - it's not me - one of my friends - my man is a man- but he's still good to me
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