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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
The sun emits a glow A golden shower of light The sunset comes though slow And leads the way to night Night brings a wait Anxiousness and some despair Sitting until late To determine if you care The long hours seem to fly Still sitting I remain Waiting as time goes by Staying awake in vain Inevitably I close my eyes And soon come the dreams Most of them lies Too good to be true it seems Morning just like every other day My first thought being you Instead of flight I stay When will I grab a clue? That waiting is for the dim And anticipating for the dumb I have balanced on one limb Not even for a crumb Just a glimpse is what I hold Of that one afternoon So warm and bold In that moment aware that soon… I would be waiting once more. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really like this one. it is very heartfelt Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so lyrical and beautiful. Eric |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
i read this again today and just realized that sometimes good things are worth the wait.. thank you for your feed back.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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