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Open Poetry #25

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-20 02:24 AM

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you are
no echo
I feel you
too close
yet
your heart
echoes mine
in beat
reflection of
same sound
mine is
ringing yours
in reply

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-20 03:19 AM

just beautiful Helen

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-02-21 08:07 AM

Beautiful.
Eric

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

3 posted 2003-02-21 10:26 AM

another beautiful piece!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2003-02-21 10:30 AM

a fine piece!

love the "my heart is ringing yours in reply" most of all!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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