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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-20 02:14 AM


Stepping Light

I want
to have
moonlight dances
with you
there is
no darkness
in your
brilliant warmth


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-02-20 03:19 AM


smile
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2003-02-21 08:48 PM


Hi SlickLady,

I loved your strength of the other person in this one, enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 512
Queens NY
3 posted 2003-02-21 09:12 PM


I love moonlight dances almost as much as this little poem!!!!!!!!!!!
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-21 10:31 PM


The light shines from your words.
Beautiful.
Eric

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