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GavinKidd
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since 2003-02-14
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0 posted 2003-02-20 12:14 PM



cautiousness thrown into the river
of your rapid growing force over
my body tingling bittersoftly to
your touching my hard-core soul.

happy feet dancing wildly around
your headless mentality toward
my closeted love for your full-bodied
ever-changing life with me.

© Copyright 2003 G. David Shennett - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-20 12:18 PM


Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-20 03:32 AM


beautiful!
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