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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-19 11:38 PM


Allergic reaction
Is what I have
It caused me to get a rash
And now I itch
Like hell

Penicellin is what caused it
I am in misery
Nothing can help it

I am on Benodryl
But so far no effect
It is horrible
I can't even get dressed
And be comfortable

You might ask
"Why is that?"
it is because the darn rash
Is on my stomach
How much more uncomfortable
Can you get
Than that?

So as I sit here
And type this poem
I try not to scratch
This darn rash
But it so itches
And is unbearable at times
That I have to scratch

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
1 posted 2003-02-19 11:39 PM


Bummer. I've had that problem before.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
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GavinKidd
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since 2003-02-14
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NH
2 posted 2003-02-20 12:24 PM


oh, Julie, I feel your pain.  Fun poem though, thanks for sharing.

Kidd

Keep your plans secret for now.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-02-20 03:27 AM


scratch all you want...life is short
RSWells
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4 posted 2003-02-20 08:46 PM


That's quite an image.
GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2003-02-20 08:58 PM


grab a brush and scratch like you've never scratched before.. but stop before it scars or makes your skin raw.
LoL

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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6 posted 2003-02-20 08:59 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is very touching, sweet friend, I hope soon the rash all clears up, just get some aloe vera and lotion! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Shlee
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since 2003-02-16
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7 posted 2003-02-20 09:02 PM


I'm so very sorry you're in such misery.  I do hope it heals very soon.

Shlee

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