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GavinKidd
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0 posted 2003-02-19 12:47 PM


you cannot

you cannot categorize me
neither phylum,    number,
          nor    
                genred gender.

you cannot gesticulate my life
no pointing,     shoving,
           or
                high-fiving allowed.

Keep your plans secret for now.

© Copyright 2003 G. David Shennett - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-19 01:05 PM


I like this alot!
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-19 01:28 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2003-02-20 04:28 AM


sigh
Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-20 04:59 PM


This is great!
Eric

gemjop
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5 posted 2003-02-20 08:19 PM


             Amen

he he, i love this....'no high fiving allowed', not sure why, but this made me really like you. perhaps finding someone who hates categories, segregation, numbers, and the stupidity of high fiving. lol, i'm ranting!!!! this made me want to read more of your poems.
this is goin into my library.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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