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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-19 12:13 PM



Stains Remain

I like
the way
you hide
in words
between the
thick lines
color leaking
behind black
and white

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-19 12:20 PM


very nice
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-19 01:31 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-19 05:23 PM


Oh wow...this is wonderful!
Eric

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4 posted 2003-02-19 05:48 PM


1slick_lady
Clever write.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-02-20 04:18 AM


you always amaze me
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6 posted 2003-09-21 08:35 PM


                                    

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-01-29 08:46 PM


Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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