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Our Love For Each Other (from titles of some of my love poems)
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Our Love For Each Other (from titles of some of my love poems) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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who loves me even with all my moods come rain or shine I thought I would try to tell you some ways I love you, Gary for you are always trying to describe your love to me I see you, my Love, in everything for in our hearts we're never far Even as I have to leave you my words are so inadequate Though sometimes our words of love-unspoken but seen they are always understood for I hear your love and you hear mine Oh how I miss you, still I miss you more than I've ever missed anyone or anything You give to me happiness with your Forever Love for me We are always singing a sweet passionate love song together It's amazing how I have the same dreams you've tasted and how we are always there for each other even in a long distance relationship and I thank God for you We have so much to be thankful for even though for you I get so lonely, Baby You and I will always remain best friends as well as everything else to each other We are going to forever be writing each other poetry Listening closely, I seem to hear the words I love You, just as you do, by the soft light of the moon while watching the stars and hearing the soft waves under the velvet skies While making plans under the velvet skies We spoke of our dreams and how our love is a treasure and love is like a fragile plant The sounds of our dreams were as soft whisperings As we were whispering with love gently in our ears, the daybreak came forth with the sun shining brightly Though words don't sem sufficient enough we can't give up hope for our love will remain for each other Our love speaks clearly and though we are apart for now I am here, there with you and you are there, here with me (to be continued) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-19-2003 10:04 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, now you have me flooding in tears, every loving poem you write you just amaze me, at first I thought Under Velvet Skies should definitely be your next entry but now though I love that poem too I think this one just HAS to be submitted, I would vote for it dozens of times if I could! (kiss on cheek) I think that with all my heart because not only is this a gorgeous love poem that is bound to make everyone sigh and smile, but also it is a tribute to YOU, a wonderful poet, and it is evident that you have such grace in your writing because of all the titles you incorporated within from your other gorgeous love poems! (big hugggssssss) Of course, I want you to follow your heart more than anything, but this is just an idea I had as this truly would have everyone cheering for you as always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-19-2003 12:41 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gee Ethel, All of this is from poem titles? Wow. What an accomplishment! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, you are just too sweet..... I thank you so much for your confidence in me, but I really think I probably should wait to submit another poem until I see if the other one makes it into the book. I think that Ron said in his article about "Reflections", that would be the best thing to do. I thank you for saying such nice things about my poems. I think you are my second biggest fan..LOL..right up there behind Gary....HeeHee!! Again, thank you, buddy......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Pat  Yeah, I was looking through the titles of the poems I've wrote and saw all these titles. I tried to write this poem with the titles kind of in the order I wrote them. Actually, I'm going to have to continue it because there were too many to put into one poem. To tell you the truth, I really didn't realize that I had written so many. I may have told you before, but the reason I write so many love poems to my Love, is because our relationship is the happiest part of my life right now. It seems lke most of the time when I start writing a love poem about me and him, it just writes itself. Well, I didn't mean to get so long-winded. Thank you, friend, for reading my poems..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Now that's allot of work. You did a great job. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW, you are sooooooooo clever.....lovely read! Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a novel and creative idea!--and it worked out sooooo well! BTW you can add me to your list of fans! Your fan club is growing, dear friend! Warm hugs to you and to he who inspires you! Linda |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW....you are so clever.....I love the softness of this... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, thank you, friend. I appreciate it...  . . Seymour, Yeah, it did tak a little while to put them all together. . . Charisma, Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it. . . Hugs to you all Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, thank you, friend. Oh, I'm one of your biggest fans, Lady. And thank you for the warm hugs to me and Gary... . . Lauren, thank you. I really appreciate that. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how creative! I LOVE this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...very creative...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, James, Thank you both very much. I thought it was fun. I'm fixing to do another one, I had so much fun...HeeHee!! LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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