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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-02-19 11:35 AM


    
Art by Alan Ayers


I have to go away
Just one short night and day
Sometimes it works that way
But I'll come home with you...

You see, I need repair
And just a little care
I have to be elsewhere
But I'll come home with you...

I guess I must admit
I'm worried just a bit
But there's no sense in it
As I'll come home with you...

So, keep the fires bright
I'll miss you in the night
But things will turn out right
When I come home with you...

Then once again I'll stand
Beside you, hand in hand
Begin the life we've planned
And I'll be home with you...

To John, with love...


Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-19-2003 11:38 AM).]

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Brad Majors
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Georgia
1 posted 2003-02-19 12:20 PM


Beautiful poem and picture
SmartChick
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2 posted 2003-02-19 01:08 PM


Sunnyone, this is so beatiful. And, I love the picture, too.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-02-19 02:24 PM


Enjoyed...James
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-02-19 03:20 PM


thank you, Brad, and for the encouragement your replies always hold...

thank you, Sue, and yes, I love his work also.  A true artist...the pic just seemed to match the poem...

thank you, James, and I'm always so happy to see your replies!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-19 04:09 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sunnyone, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, yet something about this sounded a little sad to me, I hope everything is alright! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma
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6 posted 2003-02-19 04:21 PM


How beautiful love can be!

enjoyed it very much

(((Hugs)))
Charisma

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7 posted 2003-02-19 04:51 PM


nice
Sunnyone
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8 posted 2003-02-19 05:16 PM


thank you, Noah, and never fear...no sadness, but maybe a bit of nerves, as I go in for a surgery on Friday. This was written in gratitude for all the support that I have gotten....

thank you, Charisma, and I have been blessed with beautiful love in my life...I wish it for everyone in theirs...

thank you, Vandana, and I love to see your name pop up!! Your replies really do mean a lot to me...



Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-19-2003 05:17 PM).]

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9 posted 2003-02-19 09:28 PM


What a priceless piece.....


hugssss you
Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

KoKo
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10 posted 2003-02-19 09:32 PM


This is beautiful!!! It pulls my heart in so many different directions. Thank you so much for sharing that

~Lauren

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-02-19 09:39 PM


Sunnyone
A lovely soft write, enjoyed.

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-02-19 09:51 PM


Sunny, I love to read your poems about you and your Love. It seems to be a very special love...just like mine with my Love.

I hope all will be okay with your surgery....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

Albert J. Allie
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13 posted 2003-02-19 10:46 PM


***Sigh

Yes home is where the heart is. The heart being the one we love. This was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

Sunnyone
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14 posted 2003-02-20 03:00 AM


Hi Lauren, and thank you, my friend!!  So glad that it pleased you, as it felt good to write it!!

Hi Koko!! That's what love does sometimes...just when we think we've got it all together, it pulls us another direction! Thank you, my friend!!

Hi Sy! It's always so nice to see you, and know that one of my fav poets took time to visit my work!!  Thank you so much...

Hi garysgirl!!  Yes, you and I have something in common, as love is the most important factor in our daily lives.  It's nice to know that special relationships are still out there, and flourishing!! Thank you, Ethel!!

Hi AJA, and thank you so much for appreciating the meanings in this one. I do believe that if one is happy at home, there is not much else to be needed in this life...

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

passing shadows
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15 posted 2003-02-20 04:01 AM


aw...this is so beautiful!
Sunnyone
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16 posted 2003-02-20 04:17 AM


Hi passing shadows, and thank you for giving me a lift here!! LOL!!!  Glad you enjoyed this one, too, my friend...

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

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