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Open Poetry #25
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abbe
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0 posted 2003-02-19 10:27 AM


hold this moment silently
in the palm of your heart
cup your dreams around it carefully
then toss it free
toward the stars
flying from you to forever
until it boomerangs back
touched by the stardust
of eternity

© Copyright 2003 anne earle - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-19 10:28 AM


aww this imagery is so breathtakingly beautiful
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-19 01:34 PM


I love the depth of emotion in this piece.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-02-19 02:42 PM


Enjoyed....James
Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-19 08:11 PM


This is beautiful!
Eric

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5 posted 2003-02-20 04:09 AM


whew!
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