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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2003-02-19 08:50 AM


Within ice white walls
Made by days of snow,
Insane isolation calls
Begs to get out and go,
But as flakes continue to fall,
Solitude screams out loudly NO.

Outside reality stalls
All stop and no go
Solitude calls
White winds still blows.

Gloom


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-19 10:28 AM


solitude can drive anyone to madness
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-19 01:35 PM


Loneliness could drive anybody insane

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-02-19 01:40 PM



Shhhhh....

any loud sound
will bring down
the snow from roof...

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-19 08:50 PM




I like this. I am one of few I know who could stay in for days at a time with no problem, while others go stir-crazy after 24 hours.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-02-19 09:14 PM


Believe ME I know....This snow is making me NUTS!!

GREAT READ! Thank you!

ecrivan
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6 posted 2003-02-19 11:55 PM


don't think it's solitude that brings people to madness, think that loneliness and a sense of isolation can..there are differences here
solitude allows for moments of reflection ...much appreciated Gloom


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7 posted 2003-02-20 03:56 AM


love this, it's a bit sad
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