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What Secrets Do You Carry?
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What Secrets Do You Carry? |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What secrets do you carry? What follows you from dreams to dawn... casting shadows dancing through the day? What secrets do you know? Your lips curve to mystery's touch - Recognizing more with a smile than a thousand words could ever say. What secrets do you carry? Your eyes speak of far away. What do they know? Your fingers part some holy veil yet never tell what they uncover... perhaps just a hint left in a passing touch of wonder. What secrets do you carry? Tell me... in a whisper. And I will whisper mine. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eric, All I can say is this is simply very special. Enjoy greatly and it makes me smile. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It makes perfect sense to me What has often been said, That secrets can, be kept by three, If two of the three are dead. Liked your work.... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this one is extra special.... but all of your work is...  . . (Pssst...have you made a book submission yet?...just wondering.....) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Eric..how about a book submission?? This one is terrific! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shoot, now, it's no secret that I enjoy your poetry... I'm outted! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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