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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Explored in dabblings of litmus skins Brush strokes blushing, wides and thins Whimpers inhaled deeply down Spoken mingling sole to crown Intimate these talks in trade By the eyes of tender laid While close at hand to heartily Ascend the seas unbound in glee To quiver in a language lust Of baring souls in rose and rust Without a dime or dapper quip Spoken mingling silken lip Tasted sweet of far and near Wonder lust found there to here Whispered soft on silken cheek All in lovers language speak Copyright Kkh 2/18/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (02-19-2003 12:00 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, this ade me dream of feeling my loves breath against my lips as she whispers those silkened three words to me! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, yay, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, so lovely. I adore your writing. My opinion each should be earmarked for the book...smiling here... Many lines enjoyed in this poem, but I especially like: "Of baring souls in rose and rust" Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen...soft, sensual..and one for the book! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The first lines made me think that you had an oriental flair in mind... so I kept my imagination between the doors of rice paper, and enjoyed the remainder of this poem... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Good stuff, enjoyed the read. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh yes...vivid images here.  |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
A tender way of expression! I loved it. You do great work! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, my Love and I know about that "love language"........  This is a very good book submission, Lady...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kathleen~ This is absolutely beautiful. Very much enjoyed. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, very nice |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very beautiful, TD...sensually delightful! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a gem. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Anything you write could be submitted, as all your works are finely tuned. I enjoyed this one, a true language of love poem. click |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wonderful... A good choice for submission...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hot thoughts dipped in cool language. Gets my vote. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - I need not say about what you have written, it's stunning. My vote is here... BC |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Very nice, one vote here! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is as smooth as silk. Lovely. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - In my opinion one of your best, my vote is in... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
full of grace, fair in face, your flair and style, seen just once in a while |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done, Diamond! I especially like the title of this poem. It is absolutely consistent with your poem. |
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