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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-02-18 09:05 PM


    

Sparkling water as blue as sapphires
An icy crispness in the air
Here I am at one with nature
Amongst beauty so rich and rare

An eagle catches the thermals
His next meal he hopes to seek
His eyes are ever watchful
As he scours the mountain peak

I search the hidden valleys
As far as the eye can see
The only thing that's missing
Is your presence beside me

A jewel in the crown of nature
Is what I am now seeing
As I gently close my eyes
And try to dream you into being



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins


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Albert J. Allie
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1 posted 2003-02-18 09:31 PM


This is remarkable writing! I love this part....

A jewel in the crown of nature
Is what I am now seeing
As I gently close my eyes
And try to dream you into being
;clapping:

Trillium
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2 posted 2003-02-18 10:04 PM


Hi Sue: Lovely poem!  Looks like my kind of country!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-02-18 10:13 PM


Oh wow that was beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing! It's given me the lift I needed!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2003-02-18 10:47 PM


Sue~ A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing... Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-02-18 10:48 PM


This is truly beautiful Sue

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2003-02-18 10:50 PM


this was quite cool. i especially like the the bit about an eagle catching a thermal - it kept the poem so real.

-majnu
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7 posted 2003-02-18 11:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me shed a tear as whenever I see such gorgeous visions of nature I think of my dream girl who I long ever to see her for the first time and find out her name and hold her hand! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, yay, I voted for it because I want to see this gem so much in Reflections, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-18 11:04 PM


Beautiful Sue!  This is one for the book for sure!!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2003-02-18 11:18 PM


Beautiful. A picture may be worth a thousand words, but your words paint a beautful picture!
Jason Lyle
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10 posted 2003-02-19 12:56 PM


Got my vote also,beautiful write.
Jason

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11 posted 2003-02-19 01:01 AM


Well done!  --and we came pretty close to doing an accidental duet -- /pip/Forum64/HTML/000300.html

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12 posted 2003-02-19 02:43 AM


sitting with mouth hanging open
Charisma
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13 posted 2003-02-19 04:10 AM


Beautifully penned

Charisma

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14 posted 2003-02-19 05:38 AM


Simply fantastic...way to go Sue...James
Kethry
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15 posted 2003-02-19 06:03 AM


Fabulous writing, we Victorians are Talented aren't we? *grin
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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16 posted 2003-02-19 11:42 AM


This is just lovely! *S* Can I come visit? LOL
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17 posted 2003-02-19 02:50 PM


Sue, I wish that the picture could go with it in the bood. Either way, it's beautiful, friend...

(I lost the address for the other place where your poms are. Could you tell me again? I never did finish reading all your poems.  Thanks...


Ethel  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

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18 posted 2003-02-20 03:53 AM


My goodness that is beautiful Sue, and you sure have my vote, a bit late but you got it

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

Justbleu
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19 posted 2003-02-20 10:44 AM


This is BEAUTIFUL....one my favorites so far!!! LOVED IT!!!  

Reminds me of home...and hiking in the mountains!!!!

Bridette

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20 posted 2003-02-21 10:07 PM


"A jewel in the crown of nature
Is what I am now seeing
As I gently close my eyes
And try to dream you into being"

awww....wow, I just love this part...

vlraynes
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21 posted 2003-02-22 02:51 AM



Sue~
This is truly beautiful.
I enjoyed the read.
hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sudhir Iyer
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22 posted 2003-02-22 03:06 PM


very beautiful... thanks for the read...

regards,
sudhir

aries_luv_ppl
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23 posted 2003-02-22 04:06 PM


beautiful

~Every girl has a dream within.

Larry C
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24 posted 2003-02-24 12:37 PM


Sue,
Excellent write. And a bonus, a picture of home sweet home! Way cool and thanks.
You have my vote you know.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Bill Charles
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25 posted 2003-02-24 01:09 AM


Suetang - a'hhh, I finally have found your writing... My vote for this...

BC

Munda
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26 posted 2003-02-24 06:23 AM


Absolutely beautiful poem!
NewEnglandlazurlu
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27 posted 2003-02-25 09:27 AM


Sue, this so touched my heart. I am sitting here listening to a CD by Secret Garden and the music, your words and your picture just seem to flow along together.

Hugs, Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.   
Shirley MacLaine

SmartChick
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28 posted 2003-02-25 09:47 AM


Sue, this is just beautiful.
Goodknight
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29 posted 2003-02-25 09:55 AM


Beautiful poetry Sue - loved it - Paul
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30 posted 2003-02-25 10:08 AM



No dream, I finally got here
long enough to leave a note...
I must have read this four times...
with subsequent interruptions...

Well done, Sue!

arthur
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31 posted 2003-02-25 01:51 PM


to dream into being
yes sue
we have all done that
arthur
aka michael

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32 posted 2003-03-04 08:10 PM


This must have been posted when my computer was down.  It is lovely.  Joyce
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