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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-02-18 08:00 PM


Some may ponder
Whether anything
Can be lived by themselves.

Wildflowers, seem like they don't care
The raining storm or the sunny day.
What are left behind scene
Are the honeybees who travel
Thousand miles spreading pollens

Wildflowers, indeed seem to be independent,
Yet the truth about we and them are merely the same,
All things on earth,
Need another to be functional.

Wildflowers, survive on wind,
Survive on rain, sun and bees.
We... humans rely on technology, but-
What we have forgotten is that
All knowledge are built by teams...

Teams...were all those who walk in life before us,
Who were part of our history...
Teams...are neigbour next door...
We each... contribute to human knowledge...

Let us sing this song,
In rememberance of our victory.
At the meanwhile feel sorry for...
Human distrust...and
Human deciet...for their benefit.

Disappointment...
Resentment...
Yet we have to survive.

~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-18-2003 08:03 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-02-18 09:03 PM


Eliza, you have been thinking overtime. I liked the wildflower/human comparisons.
A nice way to remind us that WE are all ONE, and interdependent, that no one really stands alone.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-18-2003 09:03 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-02-18 09:34 PM


thoughts of zen
fill the page

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2003-02-18 10:55 PM


hey good to see you midnitsun. I miss you so much! We like to post at different forums. Yeah...thank you so much for replying!

~Every girl has a dream within.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-05-02 07:28 PM


wonderful write
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