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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 02-18-2003 08:00 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

Some may ponder
Whether anything
Can be lived by themselves.

Wildflowers, seem like they don't care
The raining storm or the sunny day.
What are left behind scene
Are the honeybees who travel
Thousand miles spreading pollens

Wildflowers, indeed seem to be independent,
Yet the truth about we and them are merely the same,
All things on earth,
Need another to be functional.

Wildflowers, survive on wind,
Survive on rain, sun and bees.
We... humans rely on technology, but-
What we have forgotten is that
All knowledge are built by teams...

Teams...were all those who walk in life before us,
Who were part of our history...
Teams...are neigbour next door...
We each... contribute to human knowledge...

Let us sing this song,
In rememberance of our victory.
At the meanwhile feel sorry for...
Human distrust...and
Human deciet...for their benefit.

Disappointment...
Resentment...
Yet we have to survive.

~Every girl has a dream within.

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1 posted 02-18-2003 09:03 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Eliza, you have been thinking overtime. I liked the wildflower/human comparisons.
A nice way to remind us that WE are all ONE, and interdependent, that no one really stands alone.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-18-2003 09:03 PM).]

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2 posted 02-18-2003 09:34 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

thoughts of zen
fill the page
aries_luv_ppl
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hey good to see you midnitsun. I miss you so much! We like to post at different forums. Yeah...thank you so much for replying!

~Every girl has a dream within.

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wonderful write
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