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Wind
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0 posted 2003-02-18 07:10 PM





Blood is thicker
Than pouring rain
But a drop of each
Causes equal pain

Fish can swim,
And birds can fly
See yourself in the water,
Or yourself in the sky

As a river is long,
And an ocean wide,
For everything,
There’s a reason for pride

There’s light in the dark,
And dark in the light,
Some see black,
And some see white

But everything is
one in the same,
It depends on how
you play the game

the Wind is invisible.
        remeber me

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2003-02-18 08:41 PM


You written a cool poem here Liz.  Fun and gently pointed.  

[This message has been edited by Duncan (02-18-2003 08:43 PM).]

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-02-18 09:22 PM


Nice to see you writing again Wind
Fauxreal
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3 posted 2003-02-20 01:25 PM


beautiful poem. you remind me of myself.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-20 01:38 PM


It is so nice to be graced by the Wind today!
Missed you!
You have such depth to your writing. I have enjoyed every single one of your poems that I have read to date!--and this one is no exception!

Warm hugs,
EA

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5 posted 2003-02-20 03:15 PM


very neat! i always enjoy your writings!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-02-20 03:33 PM


Wind~
A lyrical piece ... loaded with message~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2003-02-20 08:23 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is so deeply touching, sweet friend, everything is contradictory in its own way and method and there is an opposite that can attrack nonetheless! (sigh) This is wonderful writing, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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