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Open Poetry #25

Dance of Lament

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-02-18 06:46 PM

I took your hand and across the passion floor
Held you tight, called you love
and then we begged for more
In time, we learned to dance the lover's dance
and dance...did we ever dance!
A dancing and a prancing
and a carrying on!
So busy dancing, did we forget the song?
The passion too?
Maybe it was all about he dance
I confess
Or could it have been all about nothing
I wonder
and you?

Rf

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-02-18 06:52 PM

Beautiful ...... can a dance be a dance without the soul participating in it?
Margherita

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-02-18 06:55 PM

sometimes it becomes all about the dance...the music..just doesn't matter..

like the ending of this..and the question.letting the reader wonder at their own answer.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-02-18 06:56 PM

Margherita, See Cpat's comment

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (02-18-2003 06:58 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-18 07:41 PM

...dance me to the end of time...dance me.

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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