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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-02-18 05:19 PM


  
Feeling You!


You display your beauty
for me to see and enjoy.
I long to merge with you
to be One and to feel you.

So I walk barefoot on the
grass still sparkling with dew.
And you wet my feet with
your crystal tears of Love.

And I inhale the morning air,
filling my lungs with your breath,
you clean my channels of life
providing me with new energy.

You show me the infinite Ocean
where you surround me in blue
and I dance through the waters,
weightless, carried by the waves.

And I call the joyful dolphins
to have fun, sharing in their laughter
to feel the touch of magic
flowing through the secret depths.

Then you lift me up to play
among the magnificent clouds,
towers of white, soft and bright
where I immerse into the Light.

I face the Sun, receiving its kiss,
and I close my eyes in delight
you transform my arms in wings,
I fly into the infinity of the Sky.

There I join the Angels' choir
and in perfect harmony I rejoice
and I dance and twirl and dance
within Your eternal embrace.

Feeling You!

Love, Margherita


© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-18 05:21 PM


This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-18 06:11 PM


You write from the beauty of your soul...where nothing more beautiful can be found.
Love,
Eric

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-02-18 06:13 PM


You write beautiful love letters...James
SmartChick
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4 posted 2003-02-18 11:45 PM


This is beautifully written.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-19 02:43 AM


awesome! so beautiful!
regards2you
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6 posted 2003-02-19 05:45 AM




A truly uplifitng, beautiful fantasy, that can come close to real sometimes, (well, except for the dolphins) smiling here. This is well written and enjoyed greatly.


Hugs, Pat

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Thomas119gold
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7 posted 2003-03-27 02:48 PM


There I join the Angels' choir
and in perfect harmony I rejoice
and I dance and twirl and dance
within Your eternal embrace.

This Poem catches my attention

Thomas


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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8 posted 2003-03-27 07:43 PM


MARHGERITA!!!! This is amazing:

you transform my arms in wings,
I fly into the infinity of the Sky.

Just lovely - what faith & inspiration!
(vote??)

xxoo

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2003-03-27 07:47 PM


Margherita - yes, I do like this one very much. You have a poet's heart and a romantic pen...

BC

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-03-28 08:11 AM


Thank you poets for stopping in and for your lovely comments.
Feeling you!
Love, Margherita

Paul Wilson
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11 posted 2003-03-28 08:22 PM


Margherita~ Thanks for sharing with us these beautiful words. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-03-28 09:39 PM


Margherita your poems always bring a smile to these usually frozen lips
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