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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-02-18 04:04 PM



Once Again
~ By Sue ~

If I told you how I feel now
Would you even care
My precious little dogs
I had to take back there

There was no place for them to run
Like they did do in the country
So, I took them back  to him
And, it just broke my heart you see

The tears started down my cheeks
My heart once again did break
I missed them before I left
It hurt so bad I could not speak

I know I will never see them again
My heart I do not think will mend

2-18-03


© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-18 04:23 PM


Sad but a good poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

secretlife
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2 posted 2003-02-18 04:35 PM


This is perfect poem...

I really love it...

Dont be sad dear..

Big Hug For U...

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-18 04:40 PM


Oh Sue, I'm so sorry. This really touched my heart. I can understand how you feel, because I love my little Scooter so much. He's my little buddy....
Again, I'm sorry, friend.......

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-02-18 06:44 PM


Now, this is really too sad! You conveyed such deep pain in this poem. (I do hope you'll go visit them, they miss you too!!)
Margherita

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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5 posted 2003-02-18 06:51 PM


"Lassie, come home!"

Amazing how our wonderful pets affect our hearts so.  Sad, touching and very well written.  I hope this is not a permanent situation.  (hugs)

Rf

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6 posted 2003-02-19 01:32 AM


sad but touching
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