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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-18 03:42 PM



And you point
To the stars -
And I stare in wonder
At the grace of
Your hand.

The stars smile
And shine even
Brighter –

They know... the infinite ways of love.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-18 03:44 PM


awww how sweet!
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2 posted 2003-02-18 03:48 PM


Oh so lovely...very nice Eric!!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-02-18 03:56 PM


love the way you write
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4 posted 2003-02-18 04:00 PM


Eric, you are a very good writer. I would like to see one of your poems in the book...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 04:01 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-02-18 04:08 PM


I love what u wrote too...

Nice...

Big Hug....

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6 posted 2003-02-18 04:29 PM


You caught a moment. Captured that baby and made it hold still for the camera. Doesn't that feel good?

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Margherita
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7 posted 2003-02-18 04:30 PM


Your words seem to have a soul of their own, each one an accomplished life to itself. The stars know .... cause they recognize in you one of them, a bright shining one ....
Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2003-02-18 04:31 PM


Enjoyed....James
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9 posted 2003-02-18 04:49 PM


bravo!
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10 posted 2003-02-18 11:42 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, I just love this, sweet friend, and looking through loves eyes may you find the star you dreamed upon as a child merge with the star of your love, yay, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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soft and sweet
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12 posted 2003-02-20 10:23 AM



So you're a hand watcher, too?
Good...

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