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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-18 03:30 PM



She Waits

she waits
at midnight
with lace
just to
stir the stars

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-18 03:31 PM


Beautiful.
Eric

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-02-18 03:45 PM


another pretty one
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3 posted 2003-02-18 04:34 PM


.......(Ratleader rummages for his binoculars......)

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-18 04:35 PM


Beautiful Helen

Cold hands means a warm heart

secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
5 posted 2003-02-18 04:39 PM


This is soooooooo sensitive....

Lovely...

Hugssss

Robert Frazier
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6 posted 2003-02-18 05:27 PM


...stirring the stars into the milky way!

Rf

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7 posted 2003-02-20 11:46 AM


Just maybe he is waiting
along with her waiting
wondering when the waiting
can be together
instead of waiting

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8 posted 2003-02-20 11:54 AM


enjoyed
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-02-20 12:26 PM


your mind works wonders
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10 posted 2003-02-20 08:18 PM


pretty as usual.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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