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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-02-18 02:32 PM


Will You

I think I'm
going to die
if we don't
make love.

How long
will you
make me wait?

You know
what I want.

I'm fading fast.

You won't
let me die.

Will you?

JamesLee
February16
2003

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-18 02:33 PM


I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
Posts 67

2 posted 2003-02-18 02:34 PM


a little hasty aren't we?? but i loved it
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-02-18 02:51 PM


(laughing)... sounds like you got it bad bud... hope she says soon...


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-02-18 04:57 PM


Thank you the loner, crazy4u and Cpat for responding...yeah I hope she hurrys cause I'm fading fast...James
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