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crazy4u
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0 posted 2003-02-18 02:14 PM



Headstrong and beautiful
brimming with decisions to make.
At the beginning of a path or a road,
willing and hopeful…
not condescending, or pessimistic,
optimistic and free of prejudice and bias.
Almost flowing light and fluttering.
Gently and lovely waiting to set out.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-18 02:20 PM


This is a wonderful poem. I liked the expression of feeling.

Cold hands means a warm heart

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-02-18 03:20 PM


this is like very much...helen
crazy4u
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3 posted 2003-02-19 12:03 PM


who is helen?
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2003-02-19 01:04 AM


i guess my name would be...(helen)...giggle
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-02-19 05:27 AM


Enjoyed...James
crazy4u
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6 posted 2003-02-19 02:27 PM


oh... so you are Helen! well im glad that its very you. its very me too.
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