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SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16
Posts 52
Canada

0 posted 2003-02-18 01:49 PM


It's so hard to hide what I now feel
So I've finally decided it's time to reveal
The things I feel from your simple touch
Something I now seem to crave so much
You've been the one to cause me pleasure
As as of late, have been my treasure
You caress me with a single finger
And for an eternity, the effects will linger
A touch that finds a way to my soul
And lets me know you make me whole
The pain I'v felt has seemed so unreal
But your touch has been there to heal
My life will never be the same as before
I long for everything you offer and more
When friends and family did me so wrong
Your touch would only make me strong
Things with you seem strangely so right
You cross my mind as I sleep each night
And as I lay, a silent voice from above
Reveals to me you're the one I love
But these feelings must come to an end
Cause we can't go any further than friends
Now the tears have begun to rain
And I shall once again feel pain
A pain so deep that I become weak
And have no words left to speak
But in the future will come a day
When to you, I'll have words to say
Through all this deep hurt and pain
More love and respect for you I've gained
I will now live, but miss so much
The warm caress of your simple touch

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-18 02:12 PM


This is beautiful yet sad. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
Posts 67

2 posted 2003-02-18 02:16 PM


Bittersweet. i got it. sad but lovely.
enjoyed much

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
3 posted 2003-02-18 02:19 PM


beautifully expressed.

~Every girl has a dream within.

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