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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-02-18 01:32 PM

In such tender softness
Of a big teddy bear
I will grab a hold of you
Hugging your very being
Letting you know
Just how special
You really are

So dynamically special
Will be the way
That you will please me
That the heavens
Will open up in song
Seeing the angel in you
Devour my feelings
Transferring your warmth
Inside me

In a fragrance that feeds
Every part of your temple
I will worship the ground
Of you’re never ending charms
Forming the miracle adhesion
Of erotic kissing

But where are you my love
My visions keep dreaming
In needs so real
That the fantasy of you
Haunts my very core

In the friction
Of silken desires
I will create the static
Pleasing to the nerves
That satin will shimmer
From heavens glow
Upon a sheet
Of endless stars

Whispers
Touching your neck
So softly arousing
That hair on your nape
Will scream ecstatically
Moaning for more
Lovemaking

In a cuddle so special
Arms will wrap around me
Transforming me into a babe
Of your loving caresses
As I feel your bosom
Cradle my heart

But my love
I still am missing you
For my eyes search the horizon
For your magic spell
To change this frog
For he needs
His fairy princess
To transform him
In a sexy dynamo

Sitting in front of an fireplace
In a blanket of love
As the sparks fly
Crackling in the tenderness
Of two sharing each other
Till the end of time

Yes baby
I am looking for you
And I have a treat for you
That will give you a sigh
So deep inside you
A tear will mist
Knowing it is for real

In eyes rolling
Inside your head
Your passions will flame
In reaching places
Never thought possible
In a steam so hot
The talk oozes
Melting inhibitions
As our soul will boil
Needing eternity
To cool down

But baby where are you?

D.Lester Young 2/18/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (02-18-2003 01:33 PM).]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-02-18 01:51 PM

Dave,

This is wonderfully romantic and sensual.

There are just too many phrases/lines to quote and can't seem to cut and paste with this unit, however, I liked:

"That the heavens will open up in song"

and one part I found especially nice was the entire stanza which starts with "In the friction........"

Enjoyed this greatly,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

2 posted 2003-02-18 01:58 PM

I honestly don't even know where to start.
That poem was extremely beautiful.
I really hope that this poem is included in the next book cause it truly deserves to be there.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-18 02:08 PM

This is beautiful and defiently worth my vote. I need a darn fan. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-02-18 03:25 PM

Where is she...a question many of us find ourselves asking...all I can say is prepare yourself...she will be coming soon...yes soon...James

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-02-18 03:51 PM

this would be a worthy addition to the book

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-02-18 04:19 PM

Yes...I love this

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 04:19 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-20 08:15 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, this is bound to melt your loves heart and have her running back to your heart always, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-02-21 03:47 AM

well done! beautiful!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2003-02-21 07:23 AM

A beautiful work, no doubt...

Enjoyed it muchly...

regards,
sudhir

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-02-21 08:47 AM

Very nicely done!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-02-21 09:15 AM

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

12 posted 2003-03-26 04:44 PM

Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-03-26 10:20 PM

...I am still swoooooooning!...

Love & Light,
EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2003-03-27 09:29 AM

I think this is one of your very best... I thoroughly enjoyed! *S*

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