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Love Profaned |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Thy presence does blaspheme this sacred place Where holy vows once whispered Under cool autumn skies Memory now naked profane By blood of heartache Shed in the lustful hours Wringing guilty hands. Those pretty blues that once Sent heart into joyous song Now only disgust Colors my countenance Swearing if I only recount The good times Handmade mystic fairytale Signed by Venus's hand in rays of golden dawn then love's fires rekindled Memory now so marred What was heaven Now so shallow still Praying to gods great and small Blot your image from my soul For now I just stand here Under cool Autumn skies Wanting only to hate you Finding only love Falling to my knees I cry. [This message has been edited by Brad Majors (02-18-2003 12:26 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wow, Brad....the last four lines, painful, yet perfect. Enjoyed this. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You really need to stay out of my head!! Geez, scary how very close to my soul you write. BTW~~check your email, darrrlink. Susan |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
Powerful write.. i enjoyed it "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
the site with my email on it is down so call me k |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enjoyed it. Margherita |
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