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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-18 10:51 AM

My world is shattered by
your touch -

I am a thousand broken pieces
flying in your wind.

You carry me to places unknown...yet
haunt familiar to my soul.

We have flown this way before.

The touch that destroys is
my salvation.

The wind that carries...is your love.

I fall to your touch.

And rise...reborn to your wind.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-02-18 10:58 AM

like this...the imagery works well with Shiva being a destructive goddess..and associated with sind...

few words..none wasted..all fit to the idea.

good stuff... I enjoyed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-02-18 11:00 AM

Eric..tight, compact..excellent!!
Love your style!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-18 11:23 AM

Very, very good, Eric...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-02-18 11:36 AM

Ericc, I do hope you submit one of your poems [or more] to Reflections...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-18 12:21 PM

the falling and rising! outstanding write!

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

6 posted 2003-02-18 10:24 PM

Aaaahhh... sweeter words have not been invented yet. Such words infused with Divine love... this is such a beautiful magic creation... you are amazing and very blessed.

...thank you for such incredible beauty.

Love,
Moca

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-18 11:36 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Eric, I too think you should submit a few of your gorgeous poems to Reflections, I too would happily vote for you, this is beautifully mythical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-02-19 01:31 AM

I enjoyed this.
Jason

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