Valentine's Irony (Love's Contradiction)

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ShaolinsOnlyPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-02-17

Posts 31
Brooklyn, New York

0 posted 2003-02-18 01:29 AM

Love sees even through the darkest person
yet they say that love is blind
they say that love sets your heart free
but somehow love strips you of your freedom
Love as we know makes us happy
but love can easily turn us to the road of depression
they say that love heals broken hearts
but ever wonder where this broken heart come from
Love completes a person
but why is it that a person in love is never content
Love can make a person alive
but love can kill you brutally when it leaves you
They all say that when you fall in love it is forever
... Yeah Right...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-02-18 02:30 AM

Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-02-18 03:10 PM

yes, that's how it goes:
all the possitives are when love is here,
and when its gone, the negatives take over.
but whats the alternative? death? lonliness?
its all a revolving door,
love comes and love goes

Fauxreal
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 38

3 posted 2003-02-20 07:54 AM

Hey Shaolin- fellow newbie- I just wanna say that your poem described my life to a T. That was really the truth if I ever read any.
Keep it comin'.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-20 12:50 PM

very true, honest, open, and raw

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2003-03-02 10:35 PM

Candii,

I have bad luck in the love department also. I used to say to an ex those infamous "I will always love you" words, but I really don't believe in those words anymore. Good write here.

Dawn

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-02 11:19 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so very true, dearest friend, but it is not loves fault necessarily, it is more the provider and we must take deep heart into it to understand what is love and what isn't! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-03-02 11:54 PM

How very true, great post

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-03-03 12:07 PM

I hpoe it is forever, for she made me whole.
Nice write.
Jason

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-03-03 01:10 AM

Love is far from perfect,
but close enough!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-03-03 02:16 AM

Poet - goodness - truth be told in your words - so true its almost scary - yet to not have loved at all - from pain we gather strength excellent xxoo

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