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GavinKidd
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since 2003-02-14
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NH

0 posted 2003-02-17 11:57 PM



I am


I’m worthless,
unloved,
vacant, and void.
I’m fatherless,
mild,
scared, and annoyed.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-18 12:18 PM


Full of feeling. I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-18 11:22 AM


I feel the pain in this one
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-18 11:25 AM


Not really, I'll bet!!!  

Hugs,
Ethel...garysgirl  

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4 posted 2003-02-18 12:28 PM


I can feel this
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