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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-17 08:14 PM

My fingers pray
A soft caress -
Sweet
Upon
Your lines.

They know how to pray.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-17 08:19 PM

(smiles) Yes, you can play heartstrings and you can recite them so well as you are bound to forever lute to your love so dearly and faithfully! (big hugggssssss) This is a chant of true love, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-17 09:59 PM

nice little bit.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

3 posted 2003-02-17 10:29 PM

How delicately sweet... a touch of love is a prayer in itself... even fingers know how to pray.

Beautiful...

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2003-02-18 12:25 PM

ahhh...worship...i like...helen

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-18 02:39 AM

Eric, another good one with few words...I wish I good do
the little ones this good.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-18 03:37 AM

sigh

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-02-18 05:05 PM

A sweet and deeply stirring prayer!
Love, Margherita

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

8 posted 2003-02-18 05:08 PM

Little words, deep meaning.

"Remember, courage is wings."
~*~Heather Francis~*~

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2003-02-18 05:32 PM

now I lay me down to sleep...

you capture this well in a short write.

Rf

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2003-02-18 07:59 PM

I like it alot, not sure about using 'pray' twice in such a short piece. Still a very affective write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-05-02 07:30 PM

nice

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