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Even Fingers Pray

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Ericc
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My fingers pray
A soft caress -
Sweet
Upon
Your lines.

They know how to pray.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-17-2003 08:19 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Yes, you can play heartstrings and you can recite them so well as you are bound to forever lute to your love so dearly and faithfully! (big hugggssssss) This is a chant of true love, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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nice little bit.

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How delicately sweet... a touch of love is a prayer in itself... even fingers know how to pray.

Beautiful...

Thank you...

Love,
Moca
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ahhh...worship...i like...helen
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5 posted 02-18-2003 02:39 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Eric, another good one with few words...I wish I good do
the little ones this good.
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sigh
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A sweet and deeply stirring prayer!
Love, Margherita
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Little words, deep meaning.

"Remember, courage is wings."
~*~Heather Francis~*~

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now I lay me down to sleep...

you capture this well in a short write.

Rf
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I like it alot, not sure about using 'pray' twice in such a short piece.  Still a very affective write.
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nice
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