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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-17 07:46 PM


The truth is...
There is no honesty on the tip of one's tongue,
Nor in the realm of the mind. Just paradoxical logic
With images that are born, secondary thoughts.
The discovery of secrets misunderstood that fester,
Waiting just beyond the womb to be released.
Surrealists who capture language of nonsense and utter them to those who understand.
Marriage of image and word, to complete the mind,
Begin the roots of obsessions growth,
Turning godsends to avenging angels.

Leap beyond yourself and be full of meaning.
Spread your wings and taste the air,
Your mind is corroding.
Poetry as sculpture fights against the
infiltrated evil.
Slipping into non existence.
Stultifying,
Without innocence.
Stultifying
Think of nothing.
Words driven into the page, full of promis and promises again.
Words driven into the page like a renegade.
Literary knights seeking the unexpected.

Charge into the heart of darkness, never having actually kived.
Who knows what we have endured?
Condemned to being ones self and must remain quiet.
Breathe deep and smell the invisible man of
Vulnerability, of dishonesty.
No bigger than nothing, concealing the truth,
With nothing to lose.
False and fabrication.
Being kept in the dark.
Protect your soul,
And walk not into oblivion.

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1 posted 2003-02-17 08:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Albert, time and time again I see those who lose faith in themselves and getting so hard on themselves and I try my best to encourage them the best is yet to come and they must carry on with their hearts beaconing the way! (sad sigh) This is wonderfully written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
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2 posted 2003-02-17 09:17 PM


You always have JUST the right words.....
KoKo
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3 posted 2003-03-18 08:55 AM


Albert, you are so powerful with your words. It still amazes me each time I read one of your peices. "Words driven into the page"...That was my favorite line, although each line seems to speak a thousand powerful words.
Great write Albert!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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4 posted 2003-03-18 01:50 PM


like this... very nicely written.. and the language as well as the progressive thoughts intellegent and thought provoking...


Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-03-18 05:32 PM


THANK YOU CPAT!!!!!!!!!!!

Albert J. Allie
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Queens NY
6 posted 2003-03-18 08:04 PM


Thank you again KOKO!!!!!!!!!!


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