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kayjay
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0 posted 2003-02-17 06:06 PM


Love complete?

Does love come as a whole or part?
Can we perhaps divide our heart?
Although we stay in love complete
And really don’t have wandrin’ feet,

How can one sense that surge of care
That clutches breath and curls hair?
And draws one as a siren’s song?
And lures me to the one I long?

No doubt have I as to my course;
I’m not a man who’s crude or coarse.
No steps take I to soothe this dream,
But tuck her charm away and beam.

I hug quite close the one I know
and listen to ”I love you so.”
I snuggle in without regret
and know my life is safe…and yet?


Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

© Copyright 2003 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-17 06:11 PM


This a wonderful poem. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

carol
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2 posted 2003-02-17 06:14 PM


Kayjay, this a lovely poem

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

kayjay
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3 posted 2003-02-17 06:31 PM


To Loner and Carol:
Thank you for your kind comments.  Love stories are so much fun to tell.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-02-17 07:56 PM


....and yet?
Smiling up at you Ken...
This is lovely....very lovely and much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-17 08:00 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ken, I understand this feeling of curiosity too, sweet friend, I thought my sweetheart really did love me but she didn't really and now I'm alone again and now I have no choice but to establish new rules in accepting love to my heart! (sad sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, we all love you nso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2003 08:01 PM).]

Shlee
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6 posted 2003-02-17 08:44 PM


Very nice.  You have asked some very interesting questions.  Quite thought provoking.  I enjoyed it very much.  Thanks
kayjay
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7 posted 2003-02-17 08:48 PM


To the ever lovely E,
and the Angel, also Shlee
in these lines of gratitude
I applaud your aptitude!!

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-02-17 09:19 PM


This is so beautiful, Ken....
and not just because I'm a hopeless romantic
that loves all these love poems, either....LOL...
.
.
.(If you had submitted this to the book, I would cerainly have voted for it, friend)
.
Ethel

Albert J. Allie
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9 posted 2003-02-17 10:47 PM


makes you think doesn't it??
I ahve some questions of my own
Simply beautiful!!
I like love stories.........

kayjay
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10 posted 2003-02-18 01:54 AM


To Ethel and Albert, I offer a rhyme
Please let me tell stories one love at a time
And we will all hearken and bow with head low
to marvel how words can just thrill our hearts so.  Thank you both very kindly.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Sunshine
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11 posted 2003-03-09 08:49 PM



...and yet I chance the course of dream
it takes me to ride on moonlight's beam
where schemes of times be mine in whole
and two as one will walk the shoals...

oh to think that I might converse
with a love and a life, now rehearsed,
for in my mind I've chanced to know
the one that holds my heart in glow...

~*~

KayJay...thanks for the inspiration...

kayjay
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12 posted 2003-03-09 09:02 PM


There is such a flow to your words, Karilea, you are a skilled and practiced writer.  Thanks for your note.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-03-10 02:10 AM


what an ending!
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