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Shawls of Morning
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Shawls of Morning |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wrap us in this color grey Blending both the lighter side With our darker As we let these shadows Hide the finger reach Futile release of hope I’ll touch your seams Where in join you lie Seeing if they part You… Find the spot in mind That allows me tears And release To see if I give But we will not seek light Instead the dim will drape us Not letting eyes reveal Truths Scars Lies Made to ourselves In delusional moments Of must be Wrap us in this color grey And if in the morning We are not blinded By rising palette Touch me Again |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Grey draped gently over shoulders can be as comforting as a quiet storm... enjoyed. Sunkissed. "I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I love the joining of more than one color. Without colors the world would be very boring. Love the way you expressed your thoughts here.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I’ll touch your seams Where in join you lie Seeing if they part You… Find the spot in mind That allows me tears And release To see if I give ~*~ You give us all a lot  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful Poetry! How do you do this time and again? Rf |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You are really spoiling us, but giving us all this terrific poetry. This is a definite keeper, though I keep most to study them....tho. hasn't helped me much, yet...smiling.... This one absolutely made me cry. It is precious in the very tentative 'hope' in it? Thank you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Wrap us in this color grey And if in the morning We are not blinded By rising palette Touch me Again" --------------------------------------- Yes..once again...you touch us Captain. Beautiful..perfectly beautiful. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
incredible.....you paint with perfection |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Lies Made to ourselves In delusional moments Of must be' Damn, I like that. Just on the edge of comfort. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) A simple twist of fate makes grey, but an act or expression of faith can make colorful again! (big hugggsssssss) This is a wonderful poetic touch, sweet friend, I love the way you convey yourself, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the title... am glad it softly opened the door to a wonderful read. *S* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I've been told, I look good in gray... and your shawl is warm... |
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