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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-02-17 03:59 PM


The Goblin Prince felt like nobody could love him
And he felt that was because in was ugly
But little did he know
That a young princess had a crush him
Little did he know she would bring all the love he needed straight to him

All his friends teased him
Because for all 21 years of his life
Nobody ever wanted to date him

But one day during the teasing
The little princess came along
And tried to save him
From all the teasing

"Why do you tease him so?"
Said the little princess.
"Why would a pretty faerie like yourself like to know?"
Asked his evil and mean friends.
"That is know of your business.
Leave him be.
Or I will get my father to do something really mean
To you all."
said the kind faerie princess.

After she said that
His friends back off
The Goblin Prince looked at the little princess
And all he could think was why

The faerie princess gave him a little smile
Right then his heart melted
He felt it
Right at that defining moment

He knew she liked him
He could tell by the smile

Now years later
They are married
And happier than ever

Cold hands means a warm heart

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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx
1 posted 2003-02-17 04:32 PM


I believe in Fairy Tales, let us all have the happiness to carry on. I liked the line, "Right at that defining moment".

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (02-17-2003 05:20 PM).]

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
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2 posted 2003-02-17 04:33 PM


They lived happier than ever after... sigh...

Great story poem.

Thanks for sharing!!

Love,
Moca

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-02-17 04:59 PM


I was the goblin and you were the princess Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-02-17 05:01 PM


Ahhh, how cute Julie!
Much enjoyed the fairy tale.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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5 posted 2003-02-18 11:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, I love fairy tales and especially love happy endings, this reminded me of Shrek and how they celebrated their love and showing it is not appearance that matters but the heart, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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