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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-02-17 03:53 PM

This pretty day shines full on me
To somehow sign so happily
A time when brilliance dominates
To lessen what mere time dictates

Then in the shimmer and by view
To keep me glowing in renew
A point to secret moments trill
To leap upon this ride by will

This pretty day of blue and gold
To somehow strengthen have and hold
A time to shine into these eyes
To point again to open skies

Then somehow by the same foretold
To listen close with hearts of gold
A point of promise by the hand
To walk in brilliance on the land

Copyright Kkh 2/17/103

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-02-17 03:54 PM

Enjoyed...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-02-17 03:56 PM

ThisDiamond - what can I say after reading your poems, you are bright and beautiful...

BC

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2003-02-17 04:11 PM

A great descriptive poem.. I love how you compare the emotions to the state of nature as well. Great work.

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-17 04:43 PM

Beautiful write Kathleen...
Much enjoyed the read on this snowy afternoon.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Diane Coway
Member

since 2002-08-01

Posts 61
USA

5 posted 2003-02-17 05:04 PM

Great write.
Enjoyed it much.
Hugs,
Red

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 2003-02-17 05:12 PM

I liked this one gal....(you know when I really like something...I don't make a smart ass reply)

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

7 posted 2003-02-17 05:18 PM

A very creative piece beating from the verse of a poet.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-02-17 05:22 PM

ThisDiamond
Enjoyed the read.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2003-02-17 05:29 PM

ThisDiamond, this a a wonderful and beautiful poem. Today, was a pretty nice day here, too.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

10 posted 2003-02-17 07:11 PM

This shines - a day we all should have! Thanks for this!

Cor

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2003-02-17 10:50 PM

I humbly thank all of you for helping me to hone my craft. It is because of what I learn from all of you, that I find courage and creativity, from a good and deep well. ThisDiamond

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

12 posted 2003-02-17 11:01 PM

The whole thing was beautiful but i was taken with the ending. Wow a great read! I will read it again later...and again...and again..and....

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

13 posted 2003-02-18 05:42 AM

Kathleen,

Beautiful and uplifting.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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