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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SHADOWS BREAST” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I gazed into darkness not knowing what I would find, if loving touches, a caress soft, or nothings in the dimness, yet I fear not, as I know only you, and that you are there within… Whisper dreams come alive in thoughts saying that you’re near, for in dark mist one cannot see or find, as you blend into them like the evening fog when it caresses the night… Yet in blindness I search for shadows breast, pillows of tears, or loves desire, only known what it will be by you, as you tempt, seduce, and the beats of my heart pound, as your breath touches mine… ~~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a haunting piece in many ways..I enjoyed the weaving... one never knows do they..in the shadows.. good write Bill. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Bill, An intensely personal and caressing poem. You always seem to ride the edge of the "passion wave" without wiping out! Another good! Rf |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, a very romantic and sensual poem... I liked it...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome poetry! Thanks, Eric |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Bill, very nice i really liked it always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...I like the slightly dark sensual feeling of this..and the bit of mystery. Beautiful exploration. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Bill, this is so gorgeous and sensual, sweet friend, and may the drumbeat of happiness forever pound in your heart and soul, yay! (big hugggssssss) I voted for this, we all love you so much! You have such a bautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May llove and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I remember once...walking in broad, well lit sunlight...and everything just turned dark...I thought I was losing my eyesite...scared the hell out of me...then, I noticed it was Dolly Parton...her breasts were blocking the sunlight |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill...romantic as usual...and a little haunting. Much enjoyed. ~hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
"Sensual" is the word ! angsana |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lingering thoughts my friend. Excellent! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whisper dreams come alive in thoughts saying that you’re near, for in dark mist one cannot see or find, as you blend into them like the evening fog when it caresses the night… ================================== love the title and surreal essence of this... as always your are the romantic poet at heart. well done poet sir. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whisper dreams come alive in thoughts saying that you’re near, for in dark mist one cannot see or find, as you blend into them like the evening fog when it caresses the night… ================================== love the title and surreal essence of this... as always your are the romantic poet at heart. well done poet sir. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no less than beautiful! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Just love the way you write.....beautiful!! Charisma |
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