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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-02-17 09:15 AM



The Starlight Cafe

The name was Starlight Cafe
The corner table we chose
Silver goblets,a carafe of wine
In your hand you held a rose

Placed the rose into my hand
To the corner we both glance
Piano playing love melodies
Embraced we began to dance

Swaying in close togetherness
My ears you nibble and bite
Stroked by your tender hands
Danced emblazoned in starlight

Stars shone through windows
Silver rays shone from above
We wined, dined and danced
Lips whispering words of love

Hope ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-02-17 09:23 AM


HopeS
A beautiful write, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2003-02-17 09:26 AM


a wonderful scene you offer us..

nicely done.. I enjoyed

Zinsser
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3 posted 2003-02-17 09:53 AM


nice write..... beautiful
~~ Connie ~~

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-17 10:23 AM


How lovely....and beauitfuly written.
Eric

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-02-17 10:25 AM


HopeS - a most romantic time at the Starlight Cafe, very nice write...

BC

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-02-17 10:28 AM


Thank you all for your equally sweet reponses ... I am an incurable romantic , not looking for a cure
Hope

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7 posted 2003-02-17 10:29 AM


How beautiful, Hope. I liked it very much...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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