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You left your
   thought print
upon my soul,
         to only you
do I belong.

Your silent tongue
     mouthed
   my heartsong

and
     mind mists
swirled my spirit

dizzied me
     a vacuum formed

sucked me
so far into you
I beat your heart
you breath my lung
new embryo formed
our love's begun
pressurized

exquisite pain
   exploded flash
instantaneous

~the knowing~

    I love you!

And, want you
       more than yesterday
and greater
   than tomorrow

I
need
you

now.

.
.
.

    

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

© Copyright 2003 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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an intense arrival at desire and understanding..well captured....

enjoyed this..and how it almost spirals into an ending of urgency...

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Much enjoyed the read Pat...
This one is going into my library...
A keeper for sure..very well done.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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very well written
about passion and desire
nice to read you again
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4 posted 02-17-2003 09:18 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Your words passionately sketched , how someone remains forever heart and soul etched
Hope
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Pat,
A clear declaration, enjoyed.
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Ron,

If this happened at my age, it certainly would be urgent. Tsk!
Thanks for reading and responding.

Nancy,

Thanks, for the well done and saving it.

Michele,

Yes, if you don't have it, you might as well write it. Smiling here. Thanks for your response.

Hope,

Yes, a heart and soul etch. Thank you for reading and responding.

Seymour,

Yes, it is, now if I can just find him, and he better be half blind and definitely near deaf, for I snore...
Smiling here, thanks of replying.


Hugs, to all, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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can definitely feel the intensity and urgency in this. Well done write.. if I was awake I could think of better things to say, but know I enjoyed.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Oh Alyssa,

Thanks for the laugh, though not funny about your condition.  Glad you liked this. Written quickly. Energy level is nil... I think the urgency was in getting it written and finished.

Hope you can start sleeping better.
God be with you...Hugs and love, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Beaituful work.
Eric
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A very well written piece.
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(big hugggssssssss) Oh Patricia, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, this made me tear up as I understand this urgency and hope your heart is always fulfilled with this love without the odd-ends and intentional aches! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love nand light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Eric,

Thnk you for reading and replying and for the beautiful.

Dave,

Thank you especially for reading and leaving a reply. I know how limited your time is and I really appreciate
it. Glad you think it well written.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Very well done, Pat, especially since this isn't from your present reality! Well, sometimes we write best from past memories...or desires!
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14 posted 02-17-2003 09:06 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Pat, I loved the way you wrote this.
.
.
I don't know how I missed this when I was
on here earlier today...goofy me
.
Hugs,
Ethel
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regards you had me at the opening...

You left your
   thought print
upon my soul,
         to only you
do I belong.

WOW WOW WOW WOW
I loved it!!!!
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And, want you
       more than yesterday
and greater
   than tomorrow

I
need
you

now.

A wondrous passage of one practically in heat for the presence of a lover.  I'm envious *S*.  Thank you..Ken J
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whew! breath-taking!
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Pat,
glad that i came across this...the title was intriguing and the content a passionate intense heartwarming read...

why isn't this in Reflections?
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Kaile,

You are a nag!!! Smiling. I have two poems in reflections, already.

Glad you like this. Thank you. Smiling again, at your nagging, I appreciate you!  

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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yup, I know..i have replied to both of them already...

i think this is very good..

mind mists
swirled my spirit

dizzied me
     a vacuum formed

sucked me
so far into you

Splendid imagery

our love's begun
pressurized

never heard of love beginnings being described as "pressurized"...definitely a cool correlation..

instantaneous

~the knowing~

    I love you!

this melts my heart..


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Kaile,

Thank you, really...I so appreciate you taking the time to point out certain phrases, lines....

I am glad you like this. I know, you too have a few in Reflections. I have had such a busy last few days haven't had as much time needed to review all in Reflections. This morning, already spent close to two hours on the first page of it. Wonderful poetry there, and here, hard to keep up....but, now I am late, as usual to start this day with just as important things....which didn't get finished when they should have. Always good to hear from you.
I'll catch up with yours in Reflections sooner or later (I know that is not why you commented here, smiles)  and you already read my comment to you re ?) aborted...(?) title(?)so talented are you!!!! wow! on that one...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Pat~
Ahhhhhhh, they may have thought I forgot ... I did not~

This is beautifully written~
Sometimes the vision of what might be is even more beautiful than the reality~

Keep writing, gal ... I'll sure keep reading~
When you coming back ?  'SOON' ?
I hope so ... I truly hope so~

You've done all the mending of fences that could be required of anyone ... so I'm sure it'll be 'soon'~

May He continue to bless you ... what a lovely faith you hold dear~

I love you ... love your friendship ... love the supreme poetess in you~
Guess that pretty well covers it, eh ?

Love and *Huglets* for a beautiful evening,
and a better tomorrow~
~*Marge*~



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