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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-17 06:04 AM


Sweet Chocolate Kiss (Revisited)

Some may discount or dismiss
the importance of a chocolate kiss.
But I will never lessen it's value
or let it fall by the wayside.
For I have been the recipient
of her chocolate kises before
and I am filled with a
desire to receive many more.
As long as I am able
to yearn for her lips
I will always desire
her sweet chocolate kiss.

JamesLee
February12
2003

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (02-17-2003 06:07 AM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2003-02-17 06:40 AM


Sweet and nice
Kethry

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Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-17 12:11 PM


Very sweet and touching
Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-02-17 12:12 PM


Mmmmm, yummy sweet James!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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4 posted 2003-02-17 03:41 PM


Dang, that's a good one James.
(one tiny typo to fix)
I only have vanilla, strawberry or raspberry kisses...I'm not a chocoholic.
But this is a tasty little kissing poem anyway.

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-02-17 03:43 PM


How romantic. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

carol
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6 posted 2003-02-17 06:36 PM


James,very nice and sweet

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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7 posted 2003-02-17 08:39 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love chocolate and it is one of my big weaknesses! (big hugggsssssss) May her cocoa smile always melt your heart, sweet friend, yay, I placed my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2003-02-18 06:40 PM


Gotta love those kisses!
Margherita
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9 posted 2003-02-18 06:56 PM


I was just leaving when my eyes caught the chocolate kiss .... and well I did to read it, because it's really lovely and ... stirring.
Margherita

Albert J. Allie
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10 posted 2003-02-18 07:28 PM


So sweet it gives you a tooth ache!


Suetang
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11 posted 2003-02-18 09:12 PM


Wow James!

Another work of art from your talented pen.  I like the milk chocolate ones the best!

Take care......Sue


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (02-18-2003 09:13 PM).]

Amature2
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12 posted 2003-02-18 10:43 PM


This is good, at first i thought you were writing about the "Candy" until i got to the end. Thank You for sharing.
Dark Kisses
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13 posted 2003-02-18 10:46 PM




Well written!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2003-02-19 05:15 AM


Thank you Kethry, Brad, Enchantress, Midnite, the loner, carol, Noah, Poet DeVine, Margherita, Albert, Suetang, Amature and Dark Kisses...
Amature I am talking about the chocolate and a kiss...you place a piece of chocolate in your mouth, preferably a chocolate kiss but other chocolates work fine, and you kiss someone that is close to you, taking it into your mouth and then into hers and any other variations until finally the candy is almost consumed and then you can laugh at each other when you see the chocolate all over each others lips and in some cases the face...It adds a new dimension to a kiss...James

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15 posted 2003-02-19 04:52 PM


Ahhh....who can't resist the temptation of a chocolate kiss....NOT ME!!! Very sweet!!!

Bridgette

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16 posted 2003-02-19 06:51 PM


A sweet read PoetFriendJames...
Hugs2u...
*~coco~*

passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-02-20 04:16 AM


mmmmmmmmmm
Sudhir Iyer
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18 posted 2003-02-20 03:11 PM


I love all the thoughts behind these chocolate kisses...

Your words are simply put, but very wonderfully put... and I love this work...

You are the ever romantic writer, my friend...

Regards,
Sudhir

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19 posted 2003-02-22 10:12 PM


As if kisses weren't sweet enough
you had to go and make them chocolate!
Who cares about the calories anyway? *L

Sweetly written, James. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

ecrivan
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20 posted 2003-02-22 10:28 PM


sweet and tasty this one

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-22-2003 10:29 PM).]

garysgirl
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21 posted 2003-02-22 10:44 PM


I hershey kisses...
JamesMichael
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22 posted 2003-02-22 11:42 PM


Thank you Justbleu, Coco Baci, passing shadows, Sudhir, Chanson, ecrivan and garysgirl for the nice responses.
Chanson that was a neat response...you have encouraged me to write a little more about the sweet chocolate kiss...I hope you don't mind that I include a quote by you...the poem will be called "Kiss and Tell"..James

Janet Marie
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23 posted 2003-02-24 04:58 PM


drinking hot chocolate right now and smiling at your replies to this.
Only you SBJ..only you would come up with a new kind of kissing technique.

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

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24 posted 2003-02-25 01:39 AM


Now just how appropriate is this for Valentine's Day anyway, and great for the book JM, good luck on it.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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25 posted 2003-02-25 01:48 AM


enjoyed the read...
passing shadows
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Munda
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27 posted 2003-02-25 04:44 PM


Awwww, this is so sweet. Got to love them those chocolate kisses.
Bill Charles
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28 posted 2003-02-27 11:31 PM


James - somehow I missed this one, my vote is cast...

BC

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29 posted 2003-03-01 06:51 PM


some day I will have to try that James *s
M

J. K. Mitchell
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30 posted 2003-03-01 07:30 PM


Senuously sweet!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Larry C
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31 posted 2003-03-02 03:40 PM


JM,
Cool. Nice submission.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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