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Open Poetry #25

Hear Me Feel

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-02-16 11:40 PM

Hot & wet
they slide
cutting a coarse
along dusky apples,
slipping quickly
into dimple,
curve around my chin
just to begin the process
again

Oh my love,
tomorrow may emote anew
but right now,
I ache for you
my heart aches so much
for you tonight...

Sunkissed.
"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

Waterbirdfly
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 32
China

1 posted 2003-02-16 11:50 PM

Great! I like her.

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

2 posted 2003-02-16 11:51 PM

I really liked this poem. It really made me think.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-16 11:52 PM

Sunkissed, this is great....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-17 12:16 PM

This is an awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-02-17 10:28 AM

they slide
cutting a coarse
along dusky apples,
slipping quickly
into dimple,
========================

what wonderful unique imagery!!
lovely write of longing SK

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2003-02-17 11:23 AM

What, no submission?

I think your tender writings deserve a page or two in the new book, Sunkissed....

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2003-02-17 06:14 PM

Thank you all. You are far too kind.

*hugs*

Sunkissed.

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