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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-02-16 11:21 PM


I long for you
To be with me again
When you are gone
It feels like something is missing

I long to feel your lips on mine
To feel your body as you hold me tight
I long to look into your handsome eyes of brown
And see that cute half smile

I long to be in your arms
And feel your strong muscles
I long to look at your handsome face
Especially when I wake up every morning

I am longing for you
And the love you so tenderly give me

Cold hands means a warm heart

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-02-17 05:49 AM


Enjoyed...James
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-02-17 07:37 AM


nicely done... I enjoyed
Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-17 10:28 AM


What you long for...longs for you.
Or as Rumi said - "This longing you express is the return message."

Beautiful.
Eric

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-02-17 10:43 AM


the_loner_23 - and you shall have your longing, nice write...

BC

ThunderMage
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5 posted 2003-02-17 05:00 PM


That reminds me of us Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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6 posted 2003-02-17 06:12 PM


enjoyed this... many thing we miss when we are away from the ones we care about..

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-02-18 11:16 PM




(sigh) And soon you will get all you desire, sweet friend, for you have someone here who loves you so very much and longs for you the same and shares this mutual understanding! (big hugggssssss) I too hope you and Liam are together soon, I send angel hus of hope your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-20 04:36 AM


yeah, it hurts too
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